Monday, May 24, 2010

as the world turns sample chapter

Trixie ran across the street trying to go back home but then a bus came and hit her she woke up and saw herself on the floor. The man that drove the bus got out and ask her if she was ok. she did not know who she was. she got back on her feet and ask the bus driver if he know her name and who she is. the bus driver look at her like she is crazy. but then she got up and left. the bus driver ask were she was going and she told him that she did not know.

Friday, January 15, 2010

bloods vs crips 2 draft

which side you are on Bloods/ Crips
You yes you do you have any children do you know what is going in there life. Well you better know because there future can get destroyed. Sometimes children go to school ang get bullied and there tiered of it. They see being a gang memeber as the easy root to all of there prolblems. To adults they see being in a gang to be a pronlem but to kids it is a solution. Sometimes its the parents falut for not being with there child and sometimes don't even care what they think or what they do. or maybe its not you it may be someone around you. Have you ever thought about that. now if you want information on the gangs. The bloods gang started in cennial high school in Compton California and was know as piru. The bloods fromed to protect members of the crips and soon other gangs as well. Most people that look ordinary might have a family member that is in the bloods or crips gang. Old classmate nikita stewart said"that she knows what it is like for someone to miss their family member because they are eaten up by his obsession of being a gangster.
Like her sister is part of the bloods.Gangs are a big problem for the United States Of America. But no one recognize how big a deal this is .President Barack Obama tries to change this country and its bad ways. Because everyday you you watch the news.
Like New York 1 or fox 5 OR whatever news you whatever news you watch you always hear someone gets shoot someone dies or somthing like that.Old classmate Leila said that"i am mad because i know that no progress is being made in this country.Gangs like the Bloods and Crips is still forming and no one is paying for it like last year someone got shot by a blood.And they did not get put to jail yet. Old classmate said Thalia added on what leila had to say and she said"i do not feel safe when i go outside by myself because i see young boyshave red and blue gead tie on and thatmakr me feel uncomfortable.
In the timeline things like this have been going on for a while since 1876 and this present year. But president Obama is too woried about our economy and not worrying about our safty. gangs population is slowly incresing to 50% each year. Also that every year 12% of the gang population goes down because the gang members might have got caught doing something wrong or died from being in battle. if you want to be in a gang think again so if you get bullied tell someone and you parent be responsibly for your own kids




































































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Friday, November 20, 2009

questions for your feature article interview

1}Do you have a family member that is in the bloods or crips.
2}are you a fended by this by this subject
3}IF YOU CAN STOP THIS WOULD YOU
4if YOU SEE ANYONE THAT HAVE A RED OR BLUE HEAD TIES
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Friday, November 13, 2009

who can i interview and where can i find information

the people that i would interview is my best best friend Nikita because she have a family member that is a part of the bloods. The other two people I would interview is my other friend Tracee and my other friend kinita because the both have people that are in the crips and bloods.i would get information from www.gang vilonce.com

Monday, November 9, 2009

subject verb agreement

The observation I see at gathering is that people have fun. for example my mother birthday party. people talk about what they going to do when they go home. And another example is the yankee game people was exited and they were jumping around and seeing if they were going to win that is my observation. so this concluded that when people get together they act different was.